Doc change: review comments on Distribute section.

Change-Id: I05370ebbd642fdd7d39f7854ee03f2b06271a1cb

5 files changed, 16 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/distribution.jd b/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/distribution.jd
index 291d559888d5..0d055abdb236 100644
--- a/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/distribution.jd
+++ b/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/distribution.jd
@@ -10,8 +10,7 @@ page.metaDescription=Reach the users you want, whenever you want.
 <p>On Google Play, you can publish your products to customers instantly. Just
 upload and configure your product in the <span style="font-weight:500;">Google Play Android Developer Console</span>
 and press the Publish button&mdash;your app appears in the store listings within
-hours, not weeks. There are no delays for code or policy reviews, so you keep
-complete control over your release schedule.</p>
+hours, not weeks.</p>
 
 <p>Once your app is published, you can update it as often as you want. You can
 change prices, configuration, and distribution options at any time through the
@@ -23,7 +22,7 @@ binary at any time. Google Play makes the new version available immediately and
 notifies existing customers that an update is ready for download. To streamline
 the rollout across your customer base, Google Play also lets users accept
 automatic updates of your app, so that your updates are delivered and installed
-s soon as you publish them.</p>
+as soon as you publish them.</p>
 
 <h2>Reaching the customers you want</h2>
 
diff --git a/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/monetizing.jd b/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/monetizing.jd
index 1e3437b266a2..8cd605e3e82b 100644
--- a/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/monetizing.jd
+++ b/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/monetizing.jd
@@ -41,8 +41,8 @@ manages the application download.</p>
 
 <h3 id="payment-methods">Convenient payment options</h3>
 
-<p>Users can purchase your products on Google Play using several convenient
-payment methods&mdash;credit card, Direct Carrier Billing, and Google Play balance.</p>
+<p>Users can purchase your products on Google Play using convenient
+payment methods&mdash;credit cards and Direct Carrier Billing.</p>
 
 <p><span style="font-weight:500">Credit card</span> is the most common method of payment. Users can pay using any credit card
 that they’ve registered in Google Play. To make it easy for users to get started,
diff --git a/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/visibility.jd b/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/visibility.jd
index 2c5dbe522055..2e609d93d7a8 100644
--- a/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/visibility.jd
+++ b/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/about/visibility.jd
@@ -142,20 +142,18 @@ and Badges</h4>
 </div>
 
 <p>The Google Play editorial team is dedicated to bringing the best apps to the
-attention of users. It constantly reviews apps from across Google Play to find
-not only the biggest apps and games, but also the “diamonds in the rough” that
+attention of users and setting the tone for app quality throughout the store. 
+It constantly reviews apps from across Google Play to find
+not only the best-known apps and games, but also the “diamonds in the rough” that
 they want more people to see. </p>
 
-<p>When the team finds great apps and games they use the <em>Featured</em>,
-<em>Staff Picks</em>, and other collections to promote them. Any one of those
-can give your apps dramatically higher visibility and market penetration.</p>
+<p>When the team finds great apps and games, it uses the <em>Featured</em>,
+<em>Staff Picks</em>, and other collections to promote them to users.</p>
 
-<p>You can’t nominate your app for featuring or pay for a promotional slot,
-because the editorial team wants to show the best apps and give the same chances
-to all developers. However, if you build an app that users love and that looks
-great on Android devices, the editorial team will notice. <!--In some cases,
-they will reach out to you before your app is featured to make sure that your
-app will be at its best during featuring.</p> -->
+<p>You can't nominate your app for featuring, but the team is always
+on the lookout for great apps through a number of signals and indicators. 
+If you build an app that users love and that looks great on Android devices,
+the editorial team will notice.</p>
 </div>
 
 <h4>Featured and Staff Picks</h4>
diff --git a/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/publish/console.jd b/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/publish/console.jd
index 72b97abb7473..31bef9c64c00 100644
--- a/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/publish/console.jd
+++ b/docs/html/distribute/googleplay/publish/console.jd
@@ -116,7 +116,8 @@ download). </p>
 remain free</span>. Free apps can be downloaded by any users in Google
 Play.</li>
 <li>If you publish it as priced, you can change it to free, Priced apps can be
-purchased and downloaded only from .</li>
+purchased and downloaded only by users who have registered a forms of payment
+in Google Play.</li>
 </ul>
 
 <p>In addition, you can sell in-app products and subscriptions in your app,
diff --git a/docs/html/distribute/index.jd b/docs/html/distribute/index.jd
index ffdeb2f26706..c27bc6260a4f 100644
--- a/docs/html/distribute/index.jd
+++ b/docs/html/distribute/index.jd
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ header.hide=1
     <img src="/images/home/google-play.png">
   </div>
   <div class="copy" style="position:relative;left:480px;width:360;">
-    <h1>Introducing Google Play</h1>
+    <h1>Your Apps on Google Play</h1>
     <p>The most visited store in the world for Android apps.  Cloud-connected and always synced, it's never been easier for users to find and download your apps.</p>
     
     <p><a class="landing-page-link" href="http://youtu.be/g5SzWc8-X0M">Watch a video</a></p>